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The weather changes several times a day
Iris hesitates in doorways
She has to be touched on the back of her headPhilindo uses “and” instead of “but”
The mistakes pile upAn understood subject is made parenthetical
and a captive's struggle tightens knotsDoorways frame
where inside touches outside
not itself a space or place but a planar edge
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